The Saltmarsh Courier #1 — correction round 1

Lettered file: saltmarsh-courier-r0.docx · Revision: saltmarsh-courier-r1.docx
UNCHANGED 17 · EDITED 2 · SPEAKER 1 · STYLE 1 · EMPHASIS 1 · MOVED 1 · ADDED 3 · DELETED 1
24 old - 1 deleted + 3 added = 26 new

How to use: letter each row on the lettered page shown, tick it, and keep this sheet with the round. IDs are page.panel.balloon in the lettered file (old) and the revision (new).

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1.2.1 OSKAR
I told you the tide would turn before the bell.
1.2.1 OSKAR
I warned you the tide would turn before the bell.
I toldwarned you the tide would turn before the bell.
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STYLE
1.3.2 OSKAR
Then we leave before Vell sees us.
1.3.2 OSKAR (WHISPER)
Then we leave before Vell sees us.

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2.1.1 MIRA
We should have waited for the fog to lift.
2.1.1 OSKAR
We should have waited for the fog to lift.
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2.3.1 SFX
KRAK
2.3.1 SFX
KRAKOOM
KRAKKRAKOOM

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3.1.1 CAPTION
Old Saltmarsh had a name for it.
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3.2.1 OSKAR
Don't look at it. Look at the tower.
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3.2.2 MIRA
It's following us.

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3.2.2 OSKAR
Tell her we're not stopping.
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4.1.1 CAPTION
Forty feet. Wind from the west.
5.2.1 CAPTION
Forty feet. Wind from the west.
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EMPHASIS
4.3.1 HESTA
This seal was broken before you threw it.
5.3.1 HESTA
This seal was broken before you threw it.