The Saltmarsh Courier #1 — correction round 2

Lettered file: saltmarsh-courier-r1.docx · Revision: saltmarsh-courier-r2.docx
UNCHANGED 16 · PUNCTUATION 4 · MOVED 2 · SPLIT 1 · MERGED 1 · DELETED 1
26 old - 1 deleted + 0 added (split/merge rows change item totals) = 25 new

How to use: letter each row on the lettered page shown, tick it, and keep this sheet with the round. IDs are page.panel.balloon in the lettered file (old) and the revision (new).

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Lettered page 1

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☐SPLIT
SPLIT
1.1.1 CAPTION
Saltmarsh. The morning the tide forgot to turn.
1.1.1 CAPTION
Saltmarsh.
1.1.2 CAPTION
The morning the tide forgot to turn.
☐UNCHANGED
1.1.2 SFX
DONNG
1.1.3 SFX
DONNG
☐DELETED
DELETED
1.2.2 SFX
DONNG
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Lettered page 2

DoneChangeLettered (old)Revision (new)
☐PUNCTUATION
PUNCTUATION
2.1.2 CAPTION
Twenty minutes to Gull Rock. If the current holds.
2.1.2 CAPTION
Twenty minutes to Gull Rock. If the current holds.
Twenty minutes to Gull Rock. If the current holds.
☐MERGED
MERGED
2.2.1 OSKAR
Did you hear that?
2.2.2 OSKAR
Something knocked on the hull.
2.2.1 OSKAR
Did you hear that? Something knocked on the hull.

Lettered page 3

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☐PUNCTUATION
PUNCTUATION
3.2.2 MIRA
It's following us.
3.2.2 MIRA
It’s following us.
It'sIt’s following us.

Lettered page 4

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☐PUNCTUATION
PUNCTUATION
4.1.1 CAPTION
Gull Rock signal tower.
4.1.1 CAPTION
Gull Rock Signal Tower.
Gull Rock signalSignal towerTower.

Lettered page 5 → revision pages 5, 6

DoneChangeLettered (old)Revision (new)
☐PUNCTUATION
PUNCTUATION
5.1.1 MIRA
Please catch it, please catch it...
5.1.1 MIRA
Please catch it, please catch it…
Please catch it, please catch it...…
☐MOVED
MOVED
5.3.1 HESTA
This seal was broken before you threw it.
6.1.1 HESTA
This seal was broken before you threw it.
☐MOVED
MOVED
5.3.2 MIRA
That's impossible.
6.1.2 MIRA
That's impossible.